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Sorry Guys

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Sorry guys It might take a little longer then I thought but I will try to finish it tonight, the first chapter if not then maybe tomorrow
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Starting New

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Hello Everybody I decided to quit on My legends of Spyro Rise of The Orbiter Because I can Never have a enough time to finish it but don't worry I managed to regain my confidence in writing a new story . This is an MLP story and I think You all might like it I hope It will be on www.fimfiction.net/ but I will post the first chapter sometime in June 15 or 16 at the most or sooner. But I will always be a Spyro fan. till next time see ya  
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As the war begins Flame and his father King Pyralis were in the halls of there ancestors Flame was bored and wanted something to happen so he could get out of learning about his family legacy.The royal guards rushed in the room alerting there King about the fall of the communists,Flame was relived that they came so that he can get out of there before he could leave he heard from the guards that the Orbiter was going to launch an attack on The Fire Kingdom to destroy King Pyralis and his family decedents.But Pyralis wasn't going let that happen so he tried to call for aid from The Earth Kingdom but it was to late The Orbiter and his army of Tyto dragons broke thorough their defenses Invaded the city Flame wanted to protect the castle by  guarding the doors he gathered as many guards to push back against the Orcs invading the castle,Flame has always dreamed that he would fight in battle some day and now he thinks that this is his moment to shine.But once the doors broke he was frighten by the many Orcs that killed the guards and he fled in terror.The City was under siege and for Lord Orbiter he was determinant to kill Pyralis for banning him from the fire kingdom.He knows that his kind was the superior dragon race and nothing will stand in there path of conquest.
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Back at the castle Flame was running in terror from the Orcs. He hid in the closet as the Orcs pasted him after all Orcs are very dumb.After they left, Flame saw Lord Orbiter fight his father. Pyralis was losing the fight he was no match against the Orbiter and not even useing all his power he still could not win in the end Lord Orbiter decided to behead Pyralis and steal his powers that he had within the crystal but he saw no crystal.He was so furious that he wanted tried to force him to talk but then he realized that Flame had the crystal and escaped.
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Pyralis gave Flame a crystal and told him that it had great powers within it and that he should protect it but Flame never knew that his father would make his last stand.Lord Orbiter figured it out and as Flame and his Family watch him cut off the head of Pyralis they were heart broken as flame was burning with rage and he wanted to kill Lord Orbiter.But he was endanger because he was being hunted .But he promised to return and avenge his family.As for the Orbiter He decided to show the kingdom there beloved King Pyralises head.Everyone was horrified on what Lord Orbiter could do he had conquered The Fire Kingdom. 

That is the end of chapter one             
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The war against Malefor was gone and peace was restored a young prince named Flame was worried for the future.Learning all history of previous wars.Afraid that another war will soon start.One day he thought he found his answer! he had found a warrior who want peace for all dragons around the world His name was unknown, but they called him the Orbiter.
The Orbiter made the the young prince his apprentice,Both of them tried to find a perfect solution to unite all the dragon nations.The Orbiter wanted more then a united nation but wanted lead all of the black dragons around the world and to build them a land where all of them can live in peace again because in the past Malefor destroyed the home land.In the end the nations refused.The Orbiter demanded to grant his wish if not he and his followers will destroy the council hall and the guardians as well.But Flame did not want to fight against them and want peace for all nations.In the end Flame was chosen to join the council.outraged The Orbiter decided to show them that Black dragons are a powerful nation and that they will take the all the nations world wide,Start by taking the Communists home land.The Orbiter lead an army of 10,000 dragons and were known as The TYTO UNION.Ten thousand Tyto's fighting against over 6 billion dragons.But The Orbiter was given an army of Orc's by The Spirit of MALEFOR. In the end The Orbiter beheaded their King and the communist colonies have fallen,most of the citizens retreated from their homes and left.Communist colonies are now under the control of The Orbiter,but that was only the beginning all the other black dragons realized that they are more powerful then the other dragons,that they are to be feared.Riots begin,they soon joined The Orbiter.The war for fate of earth has only begun.
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